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Man In The Moon – Draft 3

The latest version of my sonnet on the moon.  In my previous version I identified rhythmic problems to do with the shift from iambic pentameter to trochaic pentameter in the second quatrain.  It meant the loss of a syllable at … Continue reading

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I’m back.

It’s been a little while since I wrote my blog, for a pretty good reason. I’ve been away. I’ve got a lot to tell you about the things that I’ve been doing, but as a starting point, let me give … Continue reading

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